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| Hey guys, just here to ask for a little help here. I haven't got much, so I would appreciate any and all add-ons you could contribute. Long story short, I'm creating a (book? manga?) that will be created as soon as I can find someone out there who is a tolerable artist. I'm pretty good at drawing, but it falls apart after a few pages. So if you have any suggestions on where to find an artist or maybe if you'd like to contribute to the story, be my guest. However, I do ask that you try to stay on topic, although I know it's very tempting to talk about pretty much whatever.
BTW: If anyone needs some form of script help or something, I'm apparently very good at creating dialogue, so, if anyone needs help on that, let meh know. 
Story:
Last day of school, almost out. Clocks ticking. Twenty minutes... God this guy can talk. Maybe Aaron will text me and give me something to do other than sit on my #$&@.
*Feels vibrating in his pocket* Ugh, thank god. Alright, let's hope this' something good...
*Discreetly checks his phone* Oh Sh-
[Text Message] Section C3, get ovr there now. We have a problem. ~From Zoe
*Closes phone and immediately raises hand* Mr. Jar? Can I go to the bathroom?
What, now?!? We have ten minutes left! And you have a history of skipping class too, if I'm not mistaken, Mr. Arthur.
Mr. Jar, it's really important.
Wrong, It ain't that important. Now sit down, because I swear to god, if I see you skipping class again, even now, I'll personally keep you from getting your diploma.
(God #$@&!) *Checks all escape routes* (Window, perfect! Here goes...)
*Jumps out a three story window* *Lands perfectly on his feet* Sorry, Mr. Jar! This is just waaaay too important!
God @$#%! You crazy idiot, get back here!
(Sorry man, but I got bigger fish to fry. Way bigger)
*Looks at Text Message* P.S.- Titan is bak. Srsly, now man!
(Yeah I know, I know. Titan, eh? Must be my lucky day.)
So anyway, that's just a taste. Trust me, real story will be much better.
Basic plot points will be included later (when I have time  )
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The world will look up and shout, "Save us!!!"
And I will whisper back, "No."
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Bouncy Ball | |
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| ask dum0dum about zh. maybe u 2 can work together for making a story for my game =]
on topic:
it sounds great! i want MORE!!!
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katanaman1 | |
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| You guys need stories? o.O Can do, just tell me where and I can work on it.
On topic: Thanks. Again, this is kind of just an intro, but I can work on it more after exams. X( |
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Bouncy Ball | |
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| Yeah.... there are like three topics about possible stories >.>
On topic: I can't wait! |
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 everydayghost | |
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| I really like this story idea... It could go places...
Trust in me, I'm a published author.
(I never get tired of saying that!)
The one thing I will point out is that isn't actually a story. It's just a dialogue.
Just in case you didn't realise.
Cruzer323
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Watching the world burn
Dancing in the flames
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katanaman1 | |
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| This is true. And I may be pretty good in some areas, storyboarding isn't one of them. I am trying to put together a very simple story, but it will take some time. Of course, if you have any simple story suggestions, I take everything into consideration. Not to mention it's easier when you have help! :D Some time next week I should have a basic storyline, and maybe even parts of the actual thing in there. Depends on how tired I am tomorrow/wednessday. |
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dum0dum | |
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| QUOTE: cruzer323 I really like this story idea... It could go places...
Trust in me, I'm a published author.
(I never get tired of saying that!)
The one thing I will point out is that isn't actually a story. It's just a dialogue.
Just in case you didn't realise.
Cruzer323
 you have a book lol whats it called I wanna read it
QUOTE: BouncyBall ask dum0dum about zh. maybe u 2 can work together for making a story for my game =]
well I need a beta reader because my punctuation sucks and I have no way of contacting clark besides pm and he might not be on for a while
ON TOPIC(OMG A FIRST): this story might turn out well just add lots of suspense and other things that make you want to throw the book at the wall
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katanaman1 | |
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| beta reader? sure, sounds fairly easy. Just send me whatever needs to be read, and I can take a look at it! :D
On Topic: Yeah, im working on some of those moments. Trust me, there will be parts that will make you want to throw the book to the wall out of suspense. |
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Bouncy Ball | |
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| .... XD i want it NOW! D= |
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dum0dum | |
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| lol just be careful I'm already on my parents bad side I don't need a broken computer on top of things lol ok then if your my beta reader I will send it to you as soon as possible and in the meantime you can rework the current chapters here |
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Bouncy Ball | |
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| i can't wait >.< |
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dum0dum | |
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| lol do you want a copy of my unedited one too bouncy I'm almost finished or do you wanna wait for the edited version |
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everydayghost | |
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| Hey katanaman if you're feeling lazy, just give me your work so far and what you want done and I'll continue on.
And dum0dum, I entered my work into a competiton once and they liked it, so they put it in a book of the best entries from the comp.
It's not coming out until February.
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dum0dum | |
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| whats it called though?
On topic: do you have the entire story planned out? |
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Bouncy Ball | |
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| >.> off topic |
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dum0dum | |
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| now it isn't |
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Bouncy Ball | |
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| yes it is <.< |
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dum0dum | |
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| ok we need to stop.
On topic: I tried making a book like this but I ended up losing it because my dads too snoopy >.> |
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Bouncy Ball | |
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| cool.... i guess? |
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dum0dum | |
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| it was fun I had a friend beta read it for me but it turns out she was deleting her copy after she sent it to me so her brother wouldn't get snoopy and look at it but and so we were both left story-less and I thought I backed it up but the file was corrupt and the lesson in this is get a thumb drive with a password on it and tie it to your hand (its what I do now) |
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Story Creating
Story:
Last day of school, almost out. Clocks ticking. Twenty minutes... God this guy can talk. Maybe Aaron will text me and give me something to do other than sit on my #$&@.
*Feels vibrating in his pocket* Ugh, thank god. Alright, let's hope this' something good...
*Discreetly checks his phone* Oh Sh-
[Text Message] Section C3, get ovr there now. We have a problem. ~From Zoe
*Closes phone and immediately raises hand* Mr. Jar? Can I go to the bathroom?
What, now?!? We have ten minutes left! And you have a history of skipping class too, if I'm not mistaken, Mr. Arthur.
Mr. Jar, it's really important.
Wrong, It ain't that important. Now sit down, because I swear to god, if I see you skipping class again, even now, I'll personally keep you from getting your diploma.
(God #$@&!) *Checks all escape routes* (Window, perfect! Here goes...)
*Jumps out a three story window* *Lands perfectly on his feet* Sorry, Mr. Jar! This is just waaaay too important!
God @$#%! You crazy idiot, get back here!
(Sorry man, but I got bigger fish to fry. Way bigger)
*Looks at Text Message* P.S.- Titan is bak. Srsly, now man!
(Yeah I know, I know. Titan, eh? Must be my lucky day.)
So anyway, that's just a taste. Trust me, real story will be much better.
Basic plot points will be included later (when I have time 
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you have a book lol whats it called I wanna read it