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| Okay, this project is a lot older than my original one.
I came up with the idea when I first started playing TCGs. (Trading card games).
I only typed two pages up on my typewriter because I couldn't type fast enough and got frustrated with the typewriter.
Anyway, years passed and I finally got around to typing it up.
I've been typing it for two years now and can't seem to find the motivation to keep going.
Soul Rebirth.
Cruzer323
EDIT: New version with bouncy ball (Celeo Drege) and dum0dum (Jared) in it.
Soul Rebirth V2.
EDIT: New version with chapter eight and a few spelling and grammar fixes.
Sunshine and Buttercups! Okay, Soul Rebirth. How'd you guess?
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Watching the world burn
Dancing in the flames
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| do all your stories have computers in them >.> you should try making a story that like happens in a different world were computers and technology don't exist they're always fun because you can put basically anything in them
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| No.
I'm a technological guy and I appreciate what computers can do.
And where are computers mentioned in Soul Rebirth?
There's a lot of advanced technology, but that's about it...
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| here
“I’m just upgrading my modifying my computer’s graphics card. Hold on for a minute…” Zorb’s usual comment. He was determined to have the most up-to-date PC in the area, no matter what the cost. I heard a crackling electrical noise, then a sharp crack. Then I heard Zorb yelp and then curse.
last time I checked pc meant Personal Computer |
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| Oops. I forgot about that part.
I only recently wrote that and I can hardly remember half the story.
And how the heck did you read 16 pages so quick?
Oh, and what did you think of the prologue? I'm particularly proud of it.
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| the names were weird whatever happened to using regular names and it was good I like battles hehehe |
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| Well, with the names, I'll explain.
In the very early days of my primary school life, me and my friends used to still have imaginary worlds and stuff.
We later combined all our worlds into one and began our lives as Zack (me) Zute and Zorb.
I had the normal name and my two friends liked being unique, so they chose weird ones.
When I started writing this story I wanted us to be in it, so I used those names.
Well, Zorb's name was originally Zero, but that was a lame name so he changed it.
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| ............................................................................................. Xander unique but normal and I could come up with several of unique and normal names but in my stories I have the tendency to name the characters after my and my family and friends or just people I know |
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| I'm not changing my story. Period.
But overall, what do you think of it?
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| great you'd make a good writer just don't do what Stephenie Meyer did. I HATE THE HOST [>_<] |
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| What did she do?
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| she created The Host that's what she dun went and did |
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| Okay...
So any ideas towards Soul Rebirth?
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| besides continuing it no maybe you could help bouncy with the Airiph rpg story |
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| I don't usually do writing on request.
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| I'm not requesting I'm suggesting, there's a difference and it will be fun I just gotta remember the name of the creatures I made are I lost them in the pile of things I made and I don't feel like going through them because ugh there's a lot I might have it on tis computer though hmmm... my universes could dwarf yours I bet. I create an entire galaxies, worlds, sapient creatures and un-sapient creatures along with alot of humans |
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| I'm still not doing it.
I have 3 stories on the go and I want to finish at least one of them before the end of '09.
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| every story project I ever worked on had a flaw or two in it which then made the entire project go awry and stopped like my story Crescent Moon I stopped because I started working on ZH story but I'm planning on going back to it when I finish ZH and I got a couple of good ideas for it too like having dragons and elves along with the vampires and werewolves hehehe |
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| Anyway, this is getting off topic.
But I have nothing on-topic to say.
Oh, the bitter taste of irony.
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| lol Isa gotsa an idea brb |
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My OLD story project
