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| As the topic Description clearly states, I'm writing a book (a book, not a fanfic,) and I am really in need of some feedback. Only problem is, I'm not totally sure how to upload files so others can download them, so until I do PM me if you are interested in reading what I currently have. It's titled "Machine," and I am open to any new suggestions as far as the title is concerned. it's currently 57 typed pages long, with a word count of 44,556. So unless you're bored and you have a lot of time on your hands, I wouldn't suggest even starting to read it. SHOULD you choose to, however, I would like to have you know that I am totally open to any suggestions, CONSTRUCTIVE (note the bold, italicised, underlined, and capitolized letters) criticism, and any other thoughts or questions you may have.
-kthnx
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| you can't pm unless you have access to the database which im pretty sure most of us don't.... but you could post it here... rather long though so you could upload it to willhostforfood.... that's free... but there are a lotta options.
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Alright, there it is. Thanks bouncy ball for providing me with the site, seems I don't know much about forums etc, so thanks for your help. that version there is just over 50,000 words, and kinda stops at a random point, but hey, that's what I have so far. feedback pl0x |
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Bouncy Ball | |
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| You know you are supposed to add a new line when someone talks you know... |
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| yes but then I end up with unnecessary spaces, a larger file than I need, and a massive paper where finding errors and navigating through my works is a nightmare. I have it all clumped together for convinience and efficiency. (I know I spelled at least one of those wrong, stfu) |
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| (You spelled convenience wrong =p)
I haven't actually looked at this, but if you are writing a book (by that I'm assuming it's going to get published, otherwise all of this is redundant) then you really should use correct grammar or it'll be a bitch to go back through and change.
I started off my story with incorrect grammar and I thought I fixed it all but every time I read it I find at least 10 mistakes...
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Watching the world burn
Dancing in the flames
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