everydayghost | 10/24/09 01:23 am - Last edited 10/31/09 02:53 am by everydayghost | Filter |
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| Well, here I am again, my 4th topic. Hopefully this story actually gets somewhere.
This story is (extremely roughly) based on real events. All the characters however, are real, as detailed as I could get.
My sister and I are the main characters (and my sister's dog, but that's irrelevant.). I have this story entirely planned out, unlike my last stories, and I have a new method of writing which involves music, which is awesome.
I wrote this between 10pm and midnight last night, so it's a bit crappy, but please bear with me. When I get around to fixing the story, this section will probably be twice as long, I skipped over a few details because I wanted to go to sleep... =p
So where it is, Untitled Story, Draft 2.
Constructive criticism is welcome
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Watching the world burn
Dancing in the flames
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pokemon1 | |
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| Cruzer the story is so far so good
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everydayghost | |
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| I see. The only real event in this story that is wrong is that this actually happened on Tuesday September 29 at around 6pm...
If only you guys knew what I have in store for this story, it's gonna be awesome... |
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dum0dum | |
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| wtf? how did I miss this?
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A pox on all of you! |
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pokemon1 | |
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| IDK you tell me |
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everydayghost | 10/31/09 02:14 am - Last edited 10/31/09 02:51 am by everydayghost | Filter - Reply #5 |
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| I did some more work on this last night... I'll upload it when I feel a bit better...
EDIT: Updated. Still the same link in the first post. |
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Lody | |
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| pretty good story I like it.
continue writing it so I may read more please.
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pokemon1 | |
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| Sane Here |
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Bouncy Ball | |
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| SaMe here too.
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pokemon1 | |
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| Me want next part of the story |
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Bouncy Ball | |
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| Me wants it NOWSES! |
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everydayghost | |
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| Yeah, I'll get to it eventually... I do have higher priorities in my life than writing this story... |
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pokemon1 | |
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| True |
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dum0dum | 11/07/09 07:04 pm - Last edited 11/07/09 07:05 pm by dum0dum | Filter - Reply #13 |
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| gah why have I still not read this READING NOW!!!! MUST READ!!!! and I know whats in store for this story MWAHAHA |
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