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Iasper | | 03/31/11 03:09 pm - Last edited 03/31/11 05:23 pm by Iasper | Filter |
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| Well, I've been trying something and I thought it was a good idea. I made an OW for Singet, just for fun, then I made one for Searus because it was easy to make, and then I couldn't stop.
Here are the ones I've right now:
WIP means work in progress - I am working on them right now
RE means remade - I am probably going to remake them later
C&C is welcome :)
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| They're pretty good for your first tried 
Singet's head is a bit too big and round.
Searus's hands need to be bigger.
They're not quite in the pokemon style, but I can't really tell you why - you should ask David about that sort of stuff 
Looking forward to seeing more :D
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Iasper | |
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| Fixed Singet's head and Searus's claws. Added the WIPs from the grass starters aswell :) |
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| There's no reason why you couldn't have just posted this in my "PT Sprite Revamps" topic. (:
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| Not bad.  Some of them could use a bit of work, but not bad at all.
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Bouncy Ball | | 03/31/11 10:44 pm - Last edited 03/31/11 10:49 pm by Bouncy Ball | Filter - Reply #5 |
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| The perspective is weird abnd varies btw pkmn... eg singet seems to be viewed from lower down than spiquil
The shading needs a rework too. look at spiquil: its pillow shaded.
Urich's spikes bug me too... they need to be taller in the middle I think
If you look at real pokemon then you can see the difference. There tends to be a dark outline(but not black) around the edge of the hue that it touches and all inside outlines are less dark
idk... thats my 2 cents but I think they are a great start...
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| Decrease the number of colours in the palette and take a look at the real examples like BB said. |
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| Really good!
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Iasper | | 04/01/11 02:38 pm - Last edited 04/01/11 07:16 pm by Iasper | Filter - Reply #8 |
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| QUOTE: Bouncy Ball The perspective is weird abnd varies btw pkmn... eg singet seems to be viewed from lower down than spiquil
The shading needs a rework too. look at spiquil: its pillow shaded.
Urich's spikes bug me too... they need to be taller in the middle I think
If you look at real pokemon then you can see the difference. There tends to be a dark outline(but not black) around the edge of the hue that it touches and all inside outlines are less dark
idk... thats my 2 cents but I think they are a great start... |
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Bouncy Ball | |
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| dont shade from the center? cause thats what pillow shading is... |
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Iasper | |
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| QUOTE: Bouncy Ball dont shade from the center? cause thats what pillow shading is...
Yes I know, but I make the outline, fill it in and then start shading, and on some reason I get almost always a pillowshaded figure. |
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Bouncy Ball | |
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| Try shading only when you are drawing on the top/left of a line for now, then add where you think it absolutely must be... Lets see where that gets you |
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Singet's head is a bit too big and round.
Searus's hands need to be bigger.
They're not quite in the pokemon style, but I can't really tell you why - you should ask David about that sort of stuff 
Looking forward to seeing more :D
Some of them could use a bit of work, but not bad at all. 
