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Bzhuan | | 07/26/11 09:18 am - Last edited 07/28/11 12:00 pm by Bzhuan | Filter |
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| since I feel I have improved at spriting, I decided to make another amount of scratch pokemon, no reason why, just felt like it... it does not contain much, but I am making more right now.
(sorry im in china and imageshack is blocked here, and so are 99% of all other image hosters)
However, I will be quite happy if any of my submissions get added into PT (not very likely)
Any constructive/harmful criticism?
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GoldenGoshawk | |
Pyco Artist
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| When I open the image it opens Gmail...
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Bzhuan | |
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| hmm... does it show it? |
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Bouncy Ball | |
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| too small. it got shrunk.
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Bzhuan | | 07/26/11 10:23 pm - Last edited 07/27/11 12:04 am by Bzhuan | Filter - Reply #4 |
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| click to enlarge bro
EDIT: whew finally got the size issues fixed! |
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SpyShadow13 | |
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| They look like great ideas and rough drafts, but you use a bit to much black in your outlines. I'd love to se these improved.
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I now have my own sprite shop. Check it out here.
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Bzhuan | |
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| which ones need improving? |
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GoldenGoshawk | |
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| They look great, I love the eye thing  |
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Bzhuan | |
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| Thanks! I updated the dex with brighter outlines and a new one! |
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Iasper | |
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| I won't be able to give you much advice myself, but I'll try anyway: use less black in your outlines and also, some of them look a bit pillowshaded.
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Bzhuan | |
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| New one added! |
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Dark Matter | |
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| The eye one definitely has the most pokemon-like style. Keep at it!
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Bzhuan | |
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| Updated dex once again! I tried to recreate Eyevincible's style, dunno if it worked. Also, Rosecape and Bouquloak Was colored violet and Rosecape was renamed Viocape (too similar to runescape XD) |
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Iasper | |
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| Thornperor looks a bit pillowshaded, it should look better with one shade less and one extra highlight. |
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