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| Sorry, left my sketchbook at school, wait a while, I'll put up some stuff later. This is my first time drawing manga (mentioned in title) so please tell me if something looks funny.
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| You could have waited making a topic until you actually have something to upload. :P
Anyway, it seems me and Bouncy'll have competition :o
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happypuppy | | 09/27/11 10:54 pm - Last edited 09/27/11 11:16 pm by happypuppy | Filter - Reply #2 |
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| sorry, the problem is I can't work my scanner so I had to use a camera and take pictures of it. It doesn't work either because my camera completely blinds out everything so I need a few minutes to outline in pen. Where's your's and bouncy's manga drawing, I can't seem to find it I'd love to see it.
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Speed outlinging in pen. This is a really small character drawing, I finished like 4 pages but I'm going to draw some more because it takes forever to upload this onto photobucket. |
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| okay.. um, not gonna lie, these need enormous amounts of work. A good way to improve is by copying actual manga techniques, finding out how they do certain things and WHY they do it too. Practice constantly and eventually you'll develop your own style. Not saying you're not allowed to but you probably should have waited until you'd had at least some grounding with this before posting it. Keep it up, though!
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Okay, I took your advice and added some more adjustments. My camera's very blurry but do you think this is any better? |
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| I like how these second ones came out. The positions they're in seem more natural and for the most part, the clothing looks good. There's something about the girl I don't quite like, but I can't quite place my finger on what it is that's bothering me about her.
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| QUOTE: radiant17 There's something about the girl I don't quite like, but I can't quite place my finger on what it is that's bothering me about her.
Pigtails! It has got to be the pigtails in her hair.... but anyway I actually think your manga is as well as any other,
It might not look super great, but they are more like sketches than anything else! :)
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| Pigtails? Yeah, I could see that bothering some people, but I also think that it could be the pointed feet and the hand, which is to big, in my taste.
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GoldenGoshawk | | 10/03/11 08:10 pm - Last edited 10/03/11 08:10 pm by GoldenGoshawk | Filter - Reply #8 |
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| These are awesome :D
What's wrong with the girl? She looks like a cheerleader :P
EDIT: That pokéball in the first one is WAY too big haha
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| Well, it is suppose to be as big as an orange sometimes, but I agree they manga drawings are great! :) |
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happypuppy | | 10/04/11 03:18 am - Last edited 10/04/11 03:18 am by happypuppy | Filter - Reply #10 |
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| Yeah, you were right, it was the pigtails and the pointed feet. This time I changed her hair to a darker color and put in the evolved forms of the three starters. For some reason their eyes got blurred
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SpyShadow13 | | 10/04/11 05:03 pm - Last edited 11/21/11 02:43 am by SpyShadow13 | Filter - Reply #11 |
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| Much better! Or at least in my oppinion. But aren't they bigger?
The final starters, I mean. Still, I love it! The Spiquil embodies the mysteriousness of the ocean depths, just like I always thought it should. I also like how you have the Valkeran licking it's trainer's face. You made a feared warrior look cute!
EDIT: What's with the stars? They look...wrong. Not sure why...
Ive got it! Make them just dots, or possibly misshapen and pointed circles!
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| Hey the new drawings are great! You did a great job re-drawing the three starter's evolutions! |
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happypuppy | | 10/12/11 12:32 am - Last edited 10/19/11 04:43 am by happypuppy | Filter - Reply #13 |
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| These are the same characters but I tried drawing in a different style or at least the hair is is a different style
@spyshadow13, the stars are kind of odd but I draw them like that when I'm speed drawing it.
The guy on the bottom of the page looks like a girl, that's what my friends from school say.
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I had this crazy idea where if the pokemon could transform and combine with their trainers so it isn't always the pokemon that's battling and the trainer joins in.
This is what I got in some sketches
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| Your drawing skills are pretty great!
The people/pokemon idea... interesting yet that is the exact reason why Digimon went 'Down the Drain'
or in other words where it lost veiwers such as me, it was just weird and lost the aspect of why Digimon was awesome.
But, overall creative and ingenious artisitc skills, keep up the drawing I wouldn't mind veiwing more! :) |
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| I thought digimon was like an exact copy of pokemon. But then the last time I saw digimon was when I was around six years old |
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| Basically the "monster" idea of both digimon and pokemon were the same.
Digimon was ...different, you'd have to watch some episodes, because it is different but mostly the same idea changed
You'd have to watch Digimon to know the differences.
Digimon made a dramatical change in its(I beleive) 3rd or 4th season where the people became the digimon, and that is where Digimon became REALLY weird! |
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SpyShadow13 | | 11/21/11 03:20 am - Last edited 11/28/11 02:03 pm by SpyShadow13 | Filter - Reply #17 |
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| The 'morphing' idea is slightly interesting, but how would it happen? What would be the point?
In all honesty, I think it should be like a walkthrough of the game, plus a few other interesting things. Or maybe it should just be a journey of friends through the region, like the original pokemon series. |
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| QUOTE: SpyShadow13 The 'morphing' idea is slightly interseting, but how would it happen? What would be the point?
Same here with the idea of morphing....
BUT, are you going to be submitting more drawings? The ones you did put up are great and I can't wait to see more! :) |
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| It doesn't matter what the point is of morphing, you should be allowed to draw whatever you like. If he thinks they look cool with giant claws, so be it.
At least that's my opinion. I think morphing looks awesome ^^ |
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EDIT: What's with the stars? They look...wrong. Not sure why...
Ive got it! Make them just dots, or possibly misshapen and pointed circles!
...Or maybe not.