staring into the twilight
not wanting to fall asleep
lost in words not spoken
pieces of a heart still broken
thoughts swarming
so much I want to fall asleep
lost in the past
a dancing flame of crimson rouge
she dances seven nights away
without an audience
faceless figures in the crowd
everyone watching
but no one there
all lost somewhere in the twilight
she paints a picture in the mist
thunderous hooves from a thousand horses
tree frog symphonies embracing
thousands of fireflies lighting the night
two moons
one reflected
fallen in the waters
chilling the waters
icy branches stretching out across them
it turns into a dance floor
lost in this faceless crowd
some look at me
but none see me
they hear my words
but none listen
am I one of them?
I don't know
staring up at the moon
feelings pressing
so much I don't want to fall asleep
the dancing flame of crimson rouge
she dances with the fallen moon
chilled by the dance floor
a crown of ice takes its place
I pick it up off the ground
I where it high
I wear it proud
peace engulfing
so much I fall asleep
I love them, there awesome. How did you come up with them? I have one:
Like moon over
the sky, the water in the lake,
the house on the hill,
and the love in are hearts. ~GoldenGames
it's all one poem. i divided it into parts because it's like a change of scene as the poem progresses. and yours is good too. and everyone, i'll post more later this month
How come you spelt wear as "where" the first time but then "wear" (properly) the second time?
It's a pretty vivid poem and I like it, however I prefer poems that rhyme
I still like yours, I mean it's really good. Very detailed.
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I still like yours, I mean it's really good. Very detailed.